Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Situational Writing

Hi children,

Below is the answer for your homework:

Dear Aunt Sue,

How have you been?

Kevin's birthday is coming. I would like to give him a treat to celebrate his birthday for him.

I would like to take him to the Esplanade Recital Studio (1 mark) to watch a performance 'The Boy Who Touched The Moon' on the afternoon of 31 August (1 mark).

The story is about a boy who tries to touch the moon with his own reflection (1 mark). The performance is very popular as the previous three performances were sold out (1 mark).

If you would like to find out more about the performance, you can sms to 75566 to download the programme's details onto your mobile phone (1 mark).

I feel that Kevin will benefit from watching this performance as he will get to learn how to cast animal shadows using his hands and fingers (1 mark). It will be a fun and enjoyable experience for him!

I hope you will let me take him to the performance. Please let me know your reply soon.

With love,
Ivan

2 comments:

  1. I have already done the corrections,mrs sam....

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  2. I have already done it....

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